
In a previous post, I mentioned that I was writing a coronation scene for a new novel. The story is set in 2033, and unfolds in the same universe as The Quarter Percent. We follow events from three perspectives. One belongs to Sebastian Sax-Gault, who happens to be a nephew of Cordial’s.

Still drafting, but I know how the story ends. In the very last scene, after a bombshell revelation the previous evening, a hush falls over the nation on Coronation Day. The new monarch is Sebastian’s bestie, 35-year-old Carroll. In this draft of the story, Carroll’s father is still alive, so the proclamation of accession has to take place at the coronation.

By this point in the story, we have eavesdropped on meetings and know that the coronation will be stripped of pomp and pageantry. Sebastian has been asked to whittle down the government’s expenditure on the ceremony to mere shillings. The ceremony is a reckoning with the public which, after a display of hubris, has completely lost face. Nonetheless, the ordeal has been humiliating for Carroll.

The proclamation text is based on EIIR’s 1952 accession and 1953 coronation. (Read a short story inspired by the latter). As mentioned in that earlier post, Google was reading over my shoulder and recommended gospel music to me on YouTube. I made some artwork to display the text that was misunderstood. I hope you like it.

Note: This post was originally intended for publication on this date, 09/20, but I moved it up a week. I moved it back here to make way for a different post. Thank you for your attention, as always. Header image: Izrael Poznanski Palace in Lodz, Poland, by Jacques Bopp, via Unsplash. Concept art: “Accession proclamation for King Carroll”, Posca watercolour pens, and Pilot Juice metallic ink on matte/glossy magazine paper.
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I really dig the hand written text on the photographs.
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Thank you so much, Marcus. I destroyed a dozen pages and made a mess before I got something useable. So, I am very happy you liked it. xo
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I can’t wait for the finished product 😊
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Thank you, Naya. I’m writing scenes this weekend. The story is shaping up very well.
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May I ask, do you prefer writing towards a pre-arranged ending or writing more openly?
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Dave, thanks so much for asking. I do both, depending on the story. For flash fiction, I’m in the moment. However, for this story, I need to stop writing at some point, so I use this event as a propellant and a backstop for myself and the reader. It’s easy write when I know I am moving towards this point.
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Clear explanation, thanks, has made me think about my own practice. I like to have a rough idea of how to end but am happy to swerve that if it turns out differently!
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You will knock it out of the park. 🏆
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Omg..this is so lovely 💐💐💐❤
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Thank you so much. I’m very happy to have you over here. Hope you’re doing well.💞💕
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Your most welcome..!
And, I’m very happy to read from you😁
I’m doing well, so sweet of you to ask that..!😊💐
How about you..?🤗🤗
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I’m well, thanks, Akshita.
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Good Luck Lily ! The art work is beautiful. Expressions and words more powerful than one.
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Thank you for this message. Polishing a scene at the moment. Have a lovely day. 🥰
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Hmmm somehow, I was so interested in leaving you a one- word comment(😉) I didn’t mention how much I enjoyed your artwork on this post. The face that has last words “..Maud et Agnes…” is absolutely gorgeous and I really like your collages and how you lay them out..just as I would expect from you..original and artistic:)
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Thank you so much. I am shocked you could read the name in my custom scrawl. 😲 I was going for the weird factor and a jarring contrast. Happy you liked the girl. The marker decided to stop writing but I made it work in the edit.
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I did and yes I could read it:)
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❤️🧡💞💕❣️💖💝
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I extend every best wish for you to succeed. Follow your heart and your passion. You can’t go wrong. xo
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Thank you so much. 💐 I’ve been so busy but I’m looking forward to writing this story. 💚
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Love your art works!!!
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Thanks YC. I must’ve destroyed a whole magazine before finally creating these. It was fun to make them. Have a great week.
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Best of luck, I’m confident that you’ll craft it beautifully ✨
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Thanks, Hannah. It’s more like a puzzle at this point but I like a challenge.
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You’re most welcome, I have every faith in you 💫✨
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All the best Lily. 😇
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Thank you. 🍏💚
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Fascinating!
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Thank you Karima. 🧡
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