Rusted dials
fond shadows threw
o’er hapless sonnets
in poet’s brew
♞
Poet’s Brew | SB
[The photo is a hapless page from my journal, a red A5 Zequenz 360° roll up. I have tried but it never rolls up for me (story of my life). Keep chipping at that stone. Best wishes for February.]
116 replies on “Poet’s Brew”
Surreal, mystic and verbally picturesque, your flows with mystic of sentient meaning. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you, Anand. I was blocked when trying to write verse two. It dawned on me that this is what verse one was saying. Very meta. Have a mystical Monday.
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Your lovely poem rolls easily off the tongue.
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Thank you so much. The title was inspired and then I added the other lines. I was sure it needed a second verse. But that didn’t happen. I am happy you like it. Warm wishes. xo
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You’re so beautifully creative! Can’t wait to see more of your work! 🙂
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Hello! Thank you so much for your kind words. I see are fans of collage, as I’m at your blog at the moment, feasting my eyes. Good luck with the daily sketches. Warm hugs. xo SB
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You’re so welcome – your work is inspiring! And thank you so, so much – I’m really glad you enjoy my blog 🙂
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Ah, poet’s brew. Love it! Léa
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I appreciate the combination of visual artwork with poetry, so imagine this post as a like, the button I couldn’t find, so I used my words.
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You’re very kind. Thank you for browsing my archives. I’m enjoying your autobiographies. Splendid. Could you trash the comment with “God speed” as two separate words? I was auto- uncorrected. 💓
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I did it right? I don’t play with WordPress all that often so please let me know.
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I support you if you support me, there must be an exchange! So keep writing!
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What’s this?
Ohhh nothin’ … just an amazing photo and
a few poetic lines from an old notepad! 🙂 ♥ ❤
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It’s a brand new one, actually. The photo was processed about 8 times to look “rusted”. You crack me up. I had a good chuckle reading your comment. 😘😘😘
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Beautiful poem, Sabiscuit! I love the photo of your journal too 🙂
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Thank you Lori! It is great to see you again.
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I looooove the poem!
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Thank you, Nidhi. xoxoxo
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xoxoxo
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Beautiful SB. Is it wrong that I am so curious about the bits you have crossed out? 😉
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Thank you! It’s interesting to look back and wonder what on earth I was thinking. If a verse feels forced I’ll definitely abandon it.
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And that is why you are so good. You are not afraid to walk away from anything that is less than stellar. Mediocrity is not your realm 😉
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You’re so nice to me. Thank you. I would like to think I am like that across the board: friendships and relationships.
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Of this I have no doubt. I wish you lived closer.
And it is easy to be nice to someone nice.
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(Blushing). Thank you.
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A visually appealing post. An immersive read. Your words are crated in a such floating, rhythmic manner. 🙂
Here’s hoping you’ll visit my blog too at
https://thewhimsicalandwanderingsoul.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much for visiting. I appreciate your taking the time to leave a comment, too. xo
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It was a pleasure. 🙂
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Really wow… And,your handwriting is good
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Thank you Rajiv. It’s good to have you. Everytime I have chai these days, I remember your photo essays. Enjoy your Wednesday. xo
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Aha! You call it chai! Good!
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Wow rhyming and love the colours of the pic
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Thank you so much for viewing my process. I used about 8 different filters on a white page. Have a great Wednesday, Neethu. xo
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I feel Her presence so deeply..
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