Winter ices fire
in this midnight garden
where you left
me waiting in the haze
of a bucolic frost
It etches crystals
and invades my brea-
-thing streams
(There’s cramping)
But it seems …
Winter’s glance is bare
She whispers every-
-where through
twisters in this maze
With promises sublime
she sends my sighs
on down the wire
and I hope they’ll
stay away
{(-_-)}
Frost | SB
Photo: My index finger on a frosted car window one very cold morning in January.
123 replies on “Frost”
Wow lovely!!
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You are lovely, Lynn. Here’s to you for all your hard work promoting friends far and near. Best wishes and a warm hug for the rest of winter. xo
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Thanks dear!! xxx
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Who says fire and ice don’t mix. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much, Gary. xo
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Words and images so beautifully put together!
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Thank you for your encouragement.
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What a lovely poem. And that image goes perfectly with it.
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you’re warm and cozy where you are. Have a great Tuesday if you’re just starting your day. xo
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Khaya. 💗💓💚💕😘
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Sending you some sunshine all the way from South Pacific!
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Thank you, Daniela. It is good to have you here. I need all of those warm sunshine thoughts. Sending some sunhsine smiles to you. xo
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I can hear your voice, your words caress my ears and guide me into Morpheus arms. Thank you, sweet SB 😘
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Thank you, HC. It was freezing out there but I have some hope for the future. xo
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A wonderful pairing. I’m especially intrigued by your image. Quite beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Elena. I was lucky to have the idea before the end of winter. Have a great week. xo
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It’s a beautiful peom.
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Thank you for reading. Have a great week ahead.
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You too.
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Beautiful, frosty poetry… very melodic! ❄️ 🌨 ☃️❄️ 🌨 ☃️
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Thank you very much for noticing. The poem was written to a melody from Swan Lake, the Danse de Cygnes and in particular, this version by Bond, from the album Classified. I’ve embedded the video here from YouTube in case you would like to listen.
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That was lovely! I thought I heard music in your poem. Thank you. 🎤 🎧 🎼 🎹 🎷
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You have a wonderful brain to hear that, and that is seriously impressive, which is why I decided to tell you. Awesome, Poet Rummager. Catch you soon. xo
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I actually put on a sweatshirt after I read this, but read a couple of your old emails and warmed up! haha. Excellent as always! XoXO
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Thank you, John. You’re so sweet. Have a great rest and stay away from the windows. xoxoxoxoxoxxo
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I’d only go near it if I thought you were walking by. Xoxoxoxoxo
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I feel the chill SB . Creative writing and photography! ❄️
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Thank you so much. I had struggled for a while to find a suitable photo. I gave up, did that and feel pleased with the results. I am very glad it went over well. xo
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❄️ you always put forth creative and interesting photos and art! ❄️
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That’s lovely of you, thanks. xo
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Lovely poem. I like winter, but then, I don’t have to shovel. Stay warm 🙂
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Thank you, Diana. I am so glad you don’t. I am trying to stay warm as best I can. Have a great week ahead. xo
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Truly lovely 🙂
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you very much. xo
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The words and sentiments are beautiful although I would not complain if Summer made an early return!
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Yes, we need summer right now. Thank you so much for reading. xo
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Well chosen words for the day. Enjoy your Sunday.
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Thank you, Sharon. Best wishes for the week ahead.
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Brrr! That’s how I felt yesterday. Today at least the sun is shining bright. Soon we’ll have to go out and shovel and scrape the car. At least it’s exercise I guess. Stay warm and cozy!
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Stay warm too, Cynthia. Thank you so much.
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Wow, so incredibly creative! I loved it
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I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you very much. xo
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Beautiful prose.
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Thank you so much, Cara. Have a great Sunday.
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Thank ye Gods we are past winter solstice, though it doesn’t seem so! Xx
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It was too cold. I was up in the mountains somewhere and it was like, ugh! This is bizarre.
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Cool Mountaineer – literally!!
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I liked this. It brings back a forty year old memory of Scotland. And that’s probably the last time I have seen snow and ice and real frost.
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Thank you, John. I’m glad you don’t have to deal with it. Have a good night’s rest.
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Lovely! Enjoyed so much!
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Thank you so much. xo
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Enjoyed your icy finger on the window. Very imaginative….and COLD! Stay warm, dear!
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Thank you very much. I am working on staying warm today. xo
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Fabulous wetting. Bravo👏👏
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Thank you so much. xo
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