Rings
chime to reveal
all revellers unmasked
silk stockings are tokens; salvation’s the ask
tween sips from elixirs
dispensers scream chants
as ashes ascend
from bonfire’s
trance
**
Ashes x SB
with photography by Stephen Day
I would like to thank Stephen Day at the Iconophile for sharing this mesmerising photograph. It accompanied his reflection, He says: D for Disguise. I could hear a song chiming from a distance and I sat down on Monday afternoon to invite it in. Please tune in to Stephen’s blog for more art magic.
60 replies on “Ashes”
I love the bonfire’s trance, even these days without elixir, still captivating.
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Thank you very much for appreciating. I’ll have some white grape juice in your honour. I miss a good bonfire, too. Have a great week, JoAnne!
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I was telling someone just now that I went to school in Austria. Costume balls are a custom we don’t really understand in the US. Austrians take their costume balls very seriously. It’s like toddlers and tiaras on crack.
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I’ve always wanted to visit Vienna but it has to be winter during opera season. I want to see as many performances as possible. Was it high school or university?
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High school. It was the craziest three years of my life. I don’t know how I learned anything. I have to say, it is quite an experience walking into a room full of beautiful girls all wearing white dresses.
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At least you had fun during high school. I found exchange students fascinating. They live in a different world.
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We did. It spoiled me in a way. Long story, for another day.
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I don’t think anyone survived high school. I think it survived us.
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Read it aloud and really brought it to life. Very exotic. Transporting, in fact.
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Thank you, Annie. That meant a lot to me. I’m glad you could feel it, too.
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Hello, Sabiscuit. Thank you for your visit to inmidreamz. I had been thinking about leaving WordPress for a while because after a year, I still was not comfortable with the format and using it. The June 27th banner just gave me the push I needed. I hope you will continue following me on Blogger where it all started back in 2006. By the way, are you on Instagram? I post poetry there as well and am always looking for poet friends there.
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Wow… did you just call me a poet friend? It’s an honour to be thought of one by you. I think it’s more like, you are my poet friend and I’m just the friend. I would be happy to follow yours on blogger. I am not on Instagram, even though I love it with all my heart, because it is owned by THAT company. WP is kind of like Club Med. No one knows what’s going on in here. It is also infested by poltergeists. Am I able to subscribe to your Blogger blog by email? It’s (I can’t believe I’m actually using my tagline) a better idea.
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Just sneaking in here.. it’s crazy how much content there is on WP that no one knows about.. I kinda wish they would populate my facebook feed so everything is in one place.. =) anyway, super glad I found this pages and all the pages I’ve found as a result!
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Thank you, Omar. I’m happy to have you.
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Amazing poetry!
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Thank you so much.
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Hey this was a pretty good piece though I didn’t read it. Can you come read my blog though?
I am just kidding! You know I kid cause I love SB! Excellent work here! I agree the photograph is very haunting and your mystifying words work beautifully in tune with it.
🙂
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Thank you very much. You have to join us at Mardi Gras. You are too much fun to leave out of the fun. I believe that brunette women named Stephanie will be there.
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Oh, hopefully all the Stephanies will be there! : – )
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I agree with you, the mask is intriguing. I think I need to acquire one of these things 🙂
Your poem is delicate. Nice grammatical imagery.
http://acookingpotandtwistedtales.wordpress.com/
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Thank you. I’m relieved as I get really nervous about grammar. I will be around for a visit to your blog this weekend. Promise. I did not forget you. Just swamped. Thanks for reading.
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That’s okay really.I know how that can be. Sometimes, it is as if 24 hours is not enough to get things done. Happy blogging
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Wow. As ever your words give my images voice and depth that they only hinted at. Fantastic poem as always. Thank you for this.
I love masks. I collect them. I have many and varied ones which Jennifer has used in some of her posts and I intend to use in future ones. 🙂
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Jennifer is fascinating and lovely. I just adore her exquisite taste in stationery and now masks. Thank you for trusting me to translate the story in the work and as always, I appreciate you for inspiring me with your art.
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Great photograph, great poem. God, I love it when a plan comes together… Thanks guys 😉
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Thank you very much. I feel exactly what you mean. x
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Oh, how beautiful! 😳💙
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Stephen will appreciate your compliment. His work is truly awe inspiring.
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I really love his photographs and you give them an awesome additional dimension. Cheers my lovely friend 🙂
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Thank you so much for that, HC. It’s my pleasure. xo
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Gorgeous! Interesting how as you linger on the photo, your eye starts to rest on the little bit of face that’s visible. The mask and all the rings no longer hold your gaze. We are hungry to see beyond the masks, salvation’s the ask?
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Yes, salvation’s the ask. A reference to the pagan rituals on which carnivals are based. The fancy dress is part of the ceremony. Acknowledgement and offertory.
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It’s a beautifully constructed poem. The meanings wind through it like the smoke rising from the bonfire.
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You’re so lovely, thank you. I feel that Stephen’s work vibrates on its own frequency so the words flow along with almost no effort. I can imagine you looking elegant in a costume at Mardi Gras. Please tell me you have one.
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I’ve never been to Mardi Gras. And now you make me want to change that. 🙂
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And now I might have to show up to see you. x
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Perfect.
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Thank you, Ruth Ann.
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Free from inhibitions behind our masks?
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Or something. But note that at some carnivals, only the face is covered. x
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Ok, if only the face is covered, I may wish to skip the carnival 😀 Especially when it is this cold
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You’re being coy. It’s fascinating.
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No I am being Koi, keeping the scales on!
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Koi also means substantial, so yes, you are correct about yourself. Also, scales are great for weighing pros and cons. x
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I jumped on the scales recently and realised that I am scarily very substantial. But how did you know??? Now I am paranoid..
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Spider senses. I always imagined you were a chiseled, long legged, stony chested hunk. Now what am I going to do? x
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Re-evaluate 😀
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Thanks, best laugh I have had all week btw 😀
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It’s the least I could do for all the support.
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Damn, I feel like a truss now 😦
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Well, rest assured that I had a good laugh reading that and know that I trust your profound intellect.
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You trust in vain I suspect, if I was that clever I would impress myself
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You’re very impressive. x
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You are too kind, but good fun to talk to 🙂
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Thank you!
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That was sincerely meant by the way 🙂
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Your kindness is sincerely appreciated, too.
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A rarity, I will enjoy the moment…
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enchanting. yes.masks.
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I am so happy you share my fascination with them. Thank you for reading. x
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