Once so close and yet so far
Heads up you’ll see the door’s ajar
Where empty trough
The search for meaning
Again the proof
You’re backward leaning
Turned away by rays of light
Morbid distress
No will to fight
Malaise:
In anger admit defeat
First they fall
Then retreat
Angst, the rouge in Antebellum
Brought down, the despised
spew
forth
venom
21 replies on “Before the war”
you write very nice. awesome poem 🙂
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Thank you. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. x
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And i’m glad that there are people like you who can write so good … Keep writing 🙂
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Great poem!
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Thank you so much for your support, Amina. I’m finding out for myself that poetry summarises one thousand truths in a few well placed phrases.
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In my opinion, that’s the beauty of poetry 🙂
It’s obvious you’ve got talent!
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You’re really so kind and encouraging. Thank you because this is unchartered territory for me and I have to constantly ask myself what I’m doing. Not that anything compares to you, Amina. x
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Thank you for your kind words, Sabiscuit.
My advice: keep writing! Poetry may be an unfamiliar territory but the result is great 😉
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MaLaiisee..🙈
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What does that mean?
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I am feeling it right now..😣
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Thank you for the translation. I’m hoping you’re winning the “war” and that the venom doesn’t catch your lovely feet.
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Unfortunately i feel the war is long over and its the calm before the next storm
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Do you have a plan? And why are you fighting during exams?
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No..exams are over…even i don’t know what iam fighting anymore..will mail u soon…my mail keeps crashing for some reason…trying to fix it
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Okay, I’ll wait to hear from you. x
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I mailed u…u can read itif u aren’t asleep already..
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Reading it. Thanks. x
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Okay!have a lovely night
Cocoa dreams..
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Love some poetic You!
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Thank you for looking at it. x
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